theres a few that are blurred with dof volume I put over the lava so its harder to see, you know cause it's hot. any last minute crits are greatly appreciated!!
The bump on the crystals are too much. I would tone it down a bit. I would also like to see what your spec looks like. Right now it looks uniform instead of on details. I would also add another color so it's not so green. Maybe green yellow or green-blue. Keep in the family, just give a bit of variety.
I know you were having a problem with the striated rock texture and we talked about adding the dirt, but now it's too random. The dirt should have been used to break it up in the crevices, but now it's about 50/50. Subtle Dirt and you need rules. ie : If the rock is on extruding parts, it is always on the extruded part.
Lastly, what is your main light source? The moon? If so I would make it a bit more blue to match the blue part of the sky. What color is your ambient?
The lava was a great addition. Did you paint that texture?
A couple of things can be fixed.
ReplyDeleteThe bump on the crystals are too much. I would tone it down a bit. I would also like to see what your spec looks like. Right now it looks uniform instead of on details. I would also add another color so it's not so green. Maybe green yellow or green-blue. Keep in the family, just give a bit of variety.
I know you were having a problem with the striated rock texture and we talked about adding the dirt, but now it's too random. The dirt should have been used to break it up in the crevices, but now it's about 50/50. Subtle Dirt and you need rules. ie : If the rock is on extruding parts, it is always on the extruded part.
Lastly, what is your main light source? The moon? If so I would make it a bit more blue to match the blue part of the sky. What color is your ambient?
The lava was a great addition. Did you paint that texture?